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gbone
26th April 2007, 08:04 PM
http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n227/gbone30/DSCN1557copy.jpg
"in'tone'natiOn"..

http://i113.photobucket.com/albums/n227/gbone30/DSCN1559copy.jpg
"an iCecUrve"..

comments are allowed...TQ

terimakasih dgn kritikan/komen anda...amat dialukan demi kemajuan diri.

kingmarul
3rd May 2007, 10:48 AM
gbone : saya kurang pasti dan kurang jelas dgn motif shoot anda nih...
maybe ada unsur2 abstrak yg cuba disampaikan tetapi agak kabur...
mungkin perlu mencari sudut dgn lebih baik...
sharpness yg lebih baik....
dan mungkin ketika air itu baru dituang ke dlm
gelas akan menjadi lebih menarik kerana
byk buih ketika itu...
sekian...
kalau tak dapat terima MAAFkan saya...
:twisted:

kue678
3rd May 2007, 07:04 PM
stuju ngan kingmarul,but i did go through ur blogspot,woww!!impressive
i'm sure u are capable of doing waayyy better than these pictures..

arulz
3rd May 2007, 07:58 PM
just my oppinion...gmbr close up...tp cam x jelas pe yg nk fokus....pd mate saye si beginner ni la...sbb suka benor gambo macro..hehehe :lol:

gbone
7th May 2007, 05:13 PM
king marul.
Thanks 4 da comment..no prob.sy boleh terima..almaklumla..budak yg baru belajar..heheh..
kue678,
thanks 4 visiting my blog yg tak seberapa tue..heheh...

bubba
7th May 2007, 07:32 PM
gbone .... saya nak menumpang thread.

Memandangkan kita berbincang mengenai close up abstract, yg ni boleh kira abstract jugak ker?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v89/nazley/hujanMediumSmall.jpg

gbone
8th May 2007, 05:42 PM
bubba,
memang lawa...saya suka..lain dr yg lain...tone kaler dia ok..plus lighting reflek pd air tuh...